Over my self-imposed hiatus last week, I did A LOT of revising of my WiP, Jane's Air. It's already sounding loads better than it did before.
A little while ago I printed the whole thing out and put it into an awesome binder:
Yes. That is an octopus playing the piano.
It's incredibly helpful that the words are tangible; I can see and touch them, which makes my editing better (uh, does that make sense at all?).
Most of my notes say something like this:
That's something I have to work a lot on. My book is omniscient narrator, so I have the bad habit of not fully explaining how my characters feel. I'm working on it!!!
Anywho, I think I'll be needing new betas/CPs soon (I mean it this time!)... be on the lookout for a post with more details if you think you're interested.
Back to wrestling my WiP... see ya later!
2 hours ago